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Old 01-30-2010, 12:12 AM   #8
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Though it does need more detail and maybe a bit more to sink your teeth into (blood, gore violence) it was a good first story and i enjoyed it. One small thing though, members of the legion rarely run we usually res at altar and say 'well that was fun.' and Rumpe failing like a pro again!! gringgo is gonna get depressed soon XD

Keep it up Yasur, take your time with them and try to give us a bit more detail about whats going on in the battle.

P.S. Klutu is right we'd all much rather you kill him off than Ulti :P or put him in a humiliating attire.
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