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Old 01-30-2010, 05:19 AM   #11
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“What the hell are you doing Terminator!” exclaimed Kon.
“Just testing gravity, yup its works so let’s say we head out”,
LOL... so that's what he sounds like.

As for the rest of the story, it was decent, but as has already been said, could use more detail. Also, if you plan on making more stories, it would make them more interesting if you came up with a storyline that continues from story to story, rather than random unrelated battles in each story. Good job for your first story.
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Old 01-30-2010, 06:40 AM   #12
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LOL... so that's what he sounds like.

As for the rest of the story, it was decent, but as has already been said, could use more detail. Also, if you plan on making more stories, it would make them more interesting if you came up with a storyline that continues from story to story, rather than random unrelated battles in each story. Good job for your first story.
not even close to what he sounds like. he is russian and speaks very little english so its usually something like "HELLO!! MY NICE AND HERIOIC IGNIS CLAN!!! XD"
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Old 01-30-2010, 08:35 AM   #13
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yea termi is like wut hamster said but in clan chat he can say stuff like that
and actually he speaks quite good english.yes il try keep this story alive but like i said its just a starter for me.

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Old 01-30-2010, 10:00 AM   #14
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not even close to what he sounds like. he is russian and speaks very little english so its usually something like "HELLO!! MY NICE AND HERIOIC IGNIS CLAN!!! XD"
Hamster your wrong on some of that a correct version:
"HELLO !! MY NICE AND HERIOIC IGNIS CLAN !!! "
there we go
/me is on Team Termi
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Old 01-30-2010, 02:36 PM   #15
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...he done a epic kick to the nuts followed by the hammer on the head.
This made up for the crappy week I just went through. Seriously, great job.
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Old 02-01-2010, 10:06 AM   #16
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It needs bewbies.
and a snake, yes; bewbies and a snake would make a better story.
and a car chase (if one blows up, even better)
and if you can add a Jedi or a ninja its WIN.
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Old 02-01-2010, 03:32 PM   #17
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It needs bewbies.
and a snake, yes; bewbies and a snake would make a better story.
and a car chase (if one blows up, even better)
and if you can add a Jedi or a ninja its WIN.
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LMAO!!!

i was thinking of writing my own story but idk if it could contain that kind of awesomeness. it would just be out of boredom anyway.
i MIGHT be able to sneak in a ninja (no pun intended) but a car chase... doubtful
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Old 02-01-2010, 08:58 PM   #18
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Great job Yas, keep it up.

I can't wait for the next instalment!

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Old 02-01-2010, 11:57 PM   #19
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good job yasur
was a fun lil read
now go grind
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