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Old 02-09-2010, 08:13 PM   #25
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Originally Posted by Silent_Shadow View Post
I hope you don't mind me editing your stories once in a while, but if you do then I won't lol.
I found some mistakes, but nothing that bad. The words in blue are what I corrected. A few suggestions: watch your capitalization and where you put pronouns, and it's best to keep the tenses the same.
while i appreciate that. that post is really really long now. you could have left out the whole story in quotes. i appreciate your concern though.
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