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Old 02-12-2010, 12:50 PM   #4
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Good attempt. Shows promise.

If you do attempt to write some more (I hope you will) it would be nice to see it in maybe 3 parts, with each one showing a particular realm"s perspective to the others. In other words develop each realm's lore.

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